Once again, it’s First Page Feedback! Today, we have Asylum Street, a work in progress from Rolf Semprebon. The First Page Setting We learn from the very first line that we’re in Oregon in 1880. The next paragraph tells us more specifically East Portland. And what does East Portland, Oregon, look like in 1880? We […]
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Welcome back to my First Page Critique. Today we have Knights of Madness by Seán Hill. This one is from a piece of flash fiction. Basically, it’s very short fiction – anywhere from 1-4 pages or so. Seán has a FAQ about Flash Fiction on his Twitter (now X) pinned tweet (or whatever they’re called
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A popular thing to do at writers’ conferences and science fiction conventions is the ORC, or Open Read and Critique. Participants, who can range from professional to aspiring writers, will usually go around in a circle and read the first page of a manuscript and everybody else will give feedback on it. I’ve often found
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I posted this last week to Facebook, but wanted to put it here as well. Judge Aileen Cannon did her job, and did it well. You only think she didn’t if you think that her job had anything to do with justice. She was put in her position to serve the interests of the 1%
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So… Biden is officially out of the race. I was worried at first, but I’m not sure that it’s necessarily a bad thing, let alone a devastating thing. He endorsed Kamala Harris to take his place, which was really the only good choice. Now, while, yes, the rapid racists and misogynists are going to vote
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I wasn’t sure where to put this, but wanted to capture it in case I needed the information again. Also, to make it public for anyone else who has had problems with audio sources on Twitch. I couldn’t find an answer anywhere else, through googling such things as “Audio source doesn’t appear in list when
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#1: Any conjurer can tell you — though most won’t — that physical items are never created from scratch. Wait.. what’s this? Why #1, not #65? What happened to careless? Fear not, I will finish Careless is still in progress, just on a temporary hold (for one month.) During that month, I’ll be writing two
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#64: “I didn’t trick you,” Caweys said. “You just didn’t ask.”
He can be a jerk sometimes… Read More »
#63: “Not a fan of rabbit, I take it?”
Not of The Rabbit, anyway Read More »
