First Page Critique #1: Call Numbers
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A popular thing to do at writers’ conferences and science fiction conventions is the ORC, or Open Read and Critique. Participants, who can range from professional to aspiring writers, will usually go around in a circle and read the first page of a manuscript and everybody else will give feedback on it. I’ve often found
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#64: “I didn’t trick you,” Caweys said. “You just didn’t ask.”
He can be a jerk sometimes… Read More »
#63: “Not a fan of rabbit, I take it?”
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#62: The threat was clear, though.
A precisely calculated ambiguity Read More »
#60: “It’s beautiful,” Del said, and meant it.
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#59: “Huh, I honestly thought something that important would have been fastened better.”
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#57: They could breathe the same mixture they were using to keep their city aloft. This would actually work. Check out the Wikipedia article on it! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Colonization_of_Venus#Aerostat_habitats_and_floating_cities
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