Submission for First Page Feedback

Welcome to my “First Page Feedback”

Every week, I will read a submitted page and provide feedback. If you’d like the first page of your finished work or work in progress read out loud and discussed, enter it here.

If you want more information, see this blog post.

Enter your first page here (200-300 words). I will read them out loud and give my thoughts, providing feedback live on Twitch, and then post the video on my YouTube channel. Check out the videos on that channel to see what kind of feedback I provide.

Videos will be posted on YouTube every Friday morning. The live broadcast will be at random times throughout the week. If you wish to be notified when I am live, you can subscribe to my Twitch channel.

Email (Your address will be used to notify you when the critique goes live. It will not be shared or added to any mailing list) *

Title of the work *

Author Name *

Do you want your title and name mentioned when I read your entry?

Title only
Use both the title and my name
Neither. Leave me completely anonymous.

Status of work *

Paste first page (200-300 words) here. *

Do you want to be tagged on social media when the critique goes live? (Provide links below)

Facebook
Twitter
Instagram

Links to web site or social media that you want shared. (Your web site, Twitter, Facebook, whatever.)

Anything else you think I should know, or any questions?

I understand that by submitting this, permission is granted for the submitted work to be read aloud and discussion of the content will be shared on social media, including but not limited to Youtube. Both the submitted work and additional remarks will also be shared to my blog. The original author retains copyright and all other related rights to the work submitted. *

I agree.